Bookcase rewrite, UI fixes

game/begin.coffee

@@ -41,6 +41,14 @@ money = (character, system, amount) ->
 code_can_input = (character) ->
   return character.sandbox.code.length < 8
 
+code_print = (character) ->
+  mask = 8 - character.sandbox.code.length
+  retval = character.sandbox.code
+  if mask > 0
+    for i in [1..mask]
+      retval += "_"
+  return retval
+
 code_input = (character, digit) ->
   if code_can_input(character)
     character.sandbox.code = character.sandbox.code + digit
@@ -119,6 +127,8 @@ situation "start",
     He went to the neighbor's door and met a closed door.
     Ronald was working inside, quietly walking around the apartment.
     He began the inspection from [the living room.](living-room)
+
+    <hr>
   """
 
 is_visited = (situation) ->

game/story.coffee

@@ -8,9 +8,7 @@ situation "living-room",
   content: """
     Ronald is standing in a dark room with a big #{textlink("window.", "window")}
 
-    The walls are covered with a dingy rose wallpaper.
-    The room is very unnerving.
-    Was it actually her home?
+    #{textlink("The walls", "walls")} are covered with a dingy rose wallpaper.
 
     #{textlink("A book stand", "bookcase")} is hanging above #{textlink("a television set.", "tv")}
 
@@ -23,32 +21,45 @@ situation "living-room",
       else
         system.doLink("exitdoor")
   writers:
-    window: "The moon is full today. It illuminates the flat, makes the things stand out in some weird angles."
+    walls: """
+      There are colorful photographs on the walls.
+      A wooden house in a forest.
+      A village on a mountaintop.
+      A family sitting around a fire.
+      A sunset burning in a vast ocean.
+      A black monolith standing on sand dunes.
+    """
+    window: "The moon is full today. It illuminates the apartment, makes the things stand out in some weird angles."
     bookcase: """
       Either Anastacia has a very conflicting taste in books, or she has no taste at all. Let's see...
-      #{textlink("“Master and Margarita”,", "bulgakov")}
-      #{textlink("“Breakfast at Tiffany's”,", "tiffanys")}
-      #{textlink("The Soviet Encyclopedic Dictionary,", "dictionary")}
-      #{textlink("“Grey”,", "grey")}
+      #{textlink("“Soviet Black Magic: a Lost Art”,", "magic")}
+      #{textlink("”My Dinner with Zane”,", "zane")}
+      #{textlink("The Scientific Dictionary of Everything,", "dictionary")}
+      #{textlink("“Silent Things”,", "silent")}
       #{textlink("”Also sprach Zarathustra”,", "zaratustra")}
-      #{textlink("”Poker with sharks”,", "dontzova")}
-      #{textlink("”Classic sauce. Culinary collection”", "culinary")}
-      and #{textlink("The Bible.", "bible")}
+      #{textlink("”Pepperoni poker”,", "pepper")}
+      #{textlink("”Jazz sauce. Culinary collection”", "culinary")}
+      and #{textlink("Classico.", "classico")}
     """
-    bulgakov: """
-    “Master and Margarita” by Mikhail Bulgakov.
-    A famous urban fantasy satire of Soviet nineteen-thirties.
-    This is a cheap paperback edition, she read this at least a couple of times.
-    The pages have dogged ears, and coffee stains too.
-    Ronald can even see a hint of lipstick smearing the episode of Satan's dark magic variety show performance.
+    magic: """
+      ”Soviet Black Magic: a Lost Art”
+
+      The author, who calls himself The Master, describes the lost art of Soviet Union *magija.*
+      It's mostly about illusions.
+
+      This is a cheap paperback edition, but she read this at least a couple of times.
+      The pages have dogged ears, and coffee stains too.
+      Ronald can even see a hint of lipstick smearing the variety show retelling.
     """
-    tiffanys: """
-    This book looks scrawny wedged between the fat dictionary and an epic novel.
-    It looks rather new, the pages are still white and straight.
-    Maybe she didn't catch the right moment to read this.. or maybe just forgot about it.
+    zane: """
+      A three-part romantic urban fantasy detective about a girl who solves murders while dining
+      with her best werewolf friend in an Orient café.
+
+      It looks rather new, the pages are still white and straight.
+      Maybe she didn't catch the right moment to read this.. or maybe just forgot about it.
     """
-    dictionary: "A big fat dictionary of everything, issued in 1989. Nobody reads every page of these. Ronald doubts Anastacia got to read at least one page."
-    grey: "Fifty Shades of Grey, an unnecessary remake. Now from a psychopath's point of view. And she actually read that."
+    dictionary: "A big fat Dictionary of Everything, issued in 1989. Nobody reads every page of these. Ronald doubts Anastacia got to read at least one page."
+    silent: "Silent Things, a story where nothing speaks and nothing happens. *And she actually read that.*"
     zaratustra: (character, system) ->
       if character.sandbox.seen_zaratustra?
         """
@@ -68,13 +79,12 @@ situation "living-room",
           No, of course not.
           Ronald opens the book and finds a stash of money inside.
         """
-    dontzova: """
-      An "ironic detective" by Daria Dontzova about Evlampia Romanova, an amateur detective.
-      The heroine (nicknamed as Lamp) plays harp and solves murders.
-      It's a trash book filled with blatant product placement.
+    pepper: """
+      An "ironic woman detective" who plays harp and solves murders!
+      It's a trash book filled with blatant product placement. Looks untouched.
     """
     culinary: "An old culinary book. Nothing about it."
-    bible: "An Orthodox Christian Bible, Old Testament. A decent hardcover edition. Bookmarked at the Sodom episode."
+    classico: "A history of classical music, from the prehistoric times to the 1970s, a brand new edition with passages about psychedelic rock. The Bach section is bookmarked."
     tv: "An expensive 40-something inch TV standing on a stylish black stand. The room looks kinda small for that monster."
 
 situation "bedroom",
@@ -317,7 +327,7 @@ safe_button = (number) ->
     after: (character, system) ->
       code_check(character, system)
     content: (character) -> """
-      Ronald presses button #{number}. The display is #{character.sandbox.code} now.
+      Ronald presses button #{number}. The display is #{code_print(character)} now.
     """
 
 safe_button(1)

html/index.html

@@ -49,6 +49,7 @@
             <p>The game was written by <b><a href="http://en.oreolek.ru/" target="_blank">Oreolek.</a></b></p>
             <p>Approximate play time: five minutes.</p>
             <p>Written using <a href="http://undum.com" target="_blank">Undum</a> and <a href="http://sequitur.github.io/raconteur/" target="_blank">Raconteur</a>.</p>
+            <p>Betatesting credit: <a href="https://verityvirtue.wordpress.com/">Verity Virtue</a></p>
           </div>
           <div id="footright">
             <a href="./LICENSE.txt"><img src="img/mit.png" alt="This program is licensed under MIT license."></a>

sass/main.scss

@@ -232,3 +232,7 @@ ul.options {
     color: grey;
   }
 }
+hr {
+  width: 50%;
+  border-color: $body-color;
+}