fixing ink tags

game/game.ink

@@ -8,18 +8,20 @@ He came to you in a night dream. A monster is terrorising the city, he said, and
 * That was ten years ago.
 -> start2
 
-=== show_the_mace ( -> goback)
+=== show_the_mace ===
 
-{ !showed_mace:
+{ showed_mace:
-It is strapped to your hip. It's solid iron, thirty centimeter handle with leather grip, four-ridged head.
+    <> It was not made for this, but you weren't either.
-The ridges look like butterfly wings.
+- else:
-And there's a pair of white bird wings on the pommel.
+    It is strapped to your hip. It's solid iron, thirty centimeter handle with leather grip, four-ridged head.
-Weighs about seven kilos but it's light in <b>your</b> hands.
+    The ridges look like butterfly wings.
+    And there's a pair of white bird wings on the pommel.
+    Weighs about seven kilos but it's light in <b>your</b> hands.
 }
 
 ~ showed_mace = true
 
--> goback
+->->
 
 === start2 ===
 
@@ -66,18 +68,18 @@ She gives you a side-eye. You ride in silence for a while.
 * [Deflect the question.]
 <q>It wasn't that nasty. I was literally fine the next day.</q>
 <q>It was big and yellow!</q>
-  * [Lie.]
+  * * [Lie.]
   <q>No it wasn't.</q>
 
   Tabitha, the master liar. (Not.) Natalie says nothing with a pointy inflection.
   ->taxi
-  * [Show her your back.]
+  * * [Show her your back.]
   You strip off your skirt and raise the back of the shirt. No bruise.
   ->taxi
 * [Tell her the truth.]
 <q>I'm here to smite some dangerous punk with my holy mace because my Lord said so,</q> and you show her the mace.
 
--> show_the_mace (-> truth2)
+-> show_the_mace -> truth2
 
 === truth2 ===
 <q>So we're driving for you to harass and beat down someone?! Tabi, are you in a cult? Is that QAnon thing or something?</q>
@@ -107,30 +109,29 @@ You ride in silence for a while.
 
 The car enters a dark parking lot near an abandoned mall. There's a loud car party here. Natalie parks and turns to you.
 
-<q> How are you going back then? Should I wait for you to finish whatever you're doing? </q>
+<q>How are you going back then? Should I wait for you to finish whatever you're doing?</q>
 
-<q> No, I'll call a taxi. See? </q>
+<q>No, I'll call a taxi. See?</q>
 
 You show the phone in your secret skirt pocket. Natalie sighs.
 
-<q> Take care, sis. </q>
+<q>Take care, sis.</q>
 
-<q> Thanks, Nat. See you at home. </q>
+<q>Thanks, Nat. See you at home.</q>
 
 And you're off to see… some sad old guys loudly arguing about their cars. You feel a faint scent of something <em>evil</em> nearby.
 
 ->choices
 
 = choices
-{You look like a skinny teenager among some tall white dudes.|"Hey! We're starting in a three!" The guys suddenly stop arguing.|The air is quiet and tense.}
+{You look like a skinny teenager among some tall white dudes.|"Hey! We're starting in a three!" The guys suddenly stop arguing.}
 
-* <ell> (Follow the scent.) [] You can't track it, you just know it's near.
+* [<ell> (Follow the scent.)] You can't track it, you just know it's near.
 -> choices
-* <ell> [Tap one of the guys on a shoulder.]
+* [<ell> Tap one of the guys on a shoulder.] <q>Excuse me&mdash;</q>
-"Excuse me-"
+<q>Get lost, kid.</q>
-„Get lost, kid.“
 -> choices
--> start4
+* -> start4
 
 === start4 ===
 
@@ -145,18 +146,19 @@ The crowd cheers.
 
 You see a figure across the street jumping four stories right on top of an office building. This is your target.
 
-= choices
+-> choices2
+
+= choices2
 * [<ell> Smash your way in and use the stairs]
 You can't just smash the doors and enter.
 There will be an alarm and you don't want to be on camera.
--> choices
+-> choices2
 * [<ell> Jump straight to the roof]
 You're a good acrobat, but not pure <em>magic.</em> You can barely jump two stories, and here's four.
--> choices
+-> choices2
-* Climb the building
+* [Climb the building] You do have to catch the guy quickly. You look at your mace.
-Well, you do have to catch the guy quickly. You look at your mace.
 
--> show_the_mace (-> climb2)
+-> show_the_mace -> climb2
 
 === climb2 ===
 
@@ -183,9 +185,7 @@ And you get a heavy fist to the stomach. You lower your hands, snagging the mace
 He screams, and I have to paraphrase everything except the pronouns here:
 <q>Who the hell are you, crazy woman grabbing my precious flesh with her dirty hot hands?</q>
 
-  * Explain what he's doing is wrong
+-> explain
-  * Explain you don't want him anywhere near the city
-  * Explain your Lord wants him out
 
 * [Attack now, speech later]
 ~ preparedness = 1
@@ -196,10 +196,26 @@ You twirl, raise your weapon and hit him while shouting:
 
 The attack throws him off the victim, but then he just shrugs and starts to stand.
 
-  * Try to push him to the end of the roof
+-> attack
-  * Jump straight over him
+
-  * [<ell> Climb down]
+= explain
+
+  * * Explain what he's doing is wrong
+  ->explain
+  * * Explain you don't want him anywhere near the city
+  ->explain
+  * * Explain your Lord wants him out
+  ->explain
+
+= attack
+
+  * * Try to push him to the end of the roof
+  -> attack
+  * * Jump straight over him
+  -> attack
+  * * [<ell> Climb down]
   You think about climbing back down the wall, just to meet him on a safe ground. Not your best idea.
+  -> attack
 
 === battleends ===
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